Describe some of the problems over reliance on cars can cause and suggest a possible solution.

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car is one of the most critical problems all over the world. To improve our environment and health, we must solve

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problem

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together.

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essay will attempt to identify impacts and propose some applicable solutions to redress

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matter. Broadly speaking, there are some main

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problem

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issue

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. First and foremost, the main impact of

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is that we are experiencing traffic congestion whenever we commute.

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, it takes a long time to arrive at our company and school so we struggle with mental and physical problems.

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, global warming

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more serious. Because our air is polluted by vehicle smoke

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it leads to our health troubles. In terms of proposing some solutions to

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apparent issue, the members of society, the government,

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and environmental

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specialists should cooperate together to tackle

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.

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, our government must make diverse policies about public transport and the environment to encourage users of transportation

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as subway, bus, and train.

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, our nation supports transport charges and makes a bus rapid transit to overcome traffic jams especially, during peak times. A

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alternative to solve

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is that most people purchase eco-friendly cars

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as electronic vehicles and hydrogen cars. Because it can reduce air pollution. In conclusion, most people

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private automobiles for

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convenient

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.

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when

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behaviour is sustained,

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global warming has become more serious.

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, if we practice diverse ways could be sensibly and easily tackled.