Describe some of the problems over reliance on cars can cause and suggest a possible solution.

These days, depending on

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car is one of the most critical problems all over the world. To improve our environment and health, we must solve

this

problem

together.

This

essay will attempt to identify impacts and propose some applicable solutions to redress

this

matter. Broadly speaking, there are some main

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. First and foremost, the main impact of

this

problem

is that we are experiencing traffic congestion whenever we commute.

As a result

, it takes a long time to arrive at our company and school so we struggle with mental and physical problems.

Secondly

, global warming

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more serious. Because our air is polluted by vehicle smoke

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it leads to our health troubles. In terms of proposing some solutions to

this

apparent issue, the members of society, the government,

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specialists should cooperate together to tackle

this

problem

.

Firstly

, our government must make diverse policies about public transport and the environment to encourage users of transportation

such

as subway, bus, and train.

For instance

, our nation supports transport charges and makes a bus rapid transit to overcome traffic jams especially, during peak times. A

further

alternative to solve

this

problem

is that most people purchase eco-friendly cars

such

as electronic vehicles and hydrogen cars. Because it can reduce air pollution. In conclusion, most people

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private automobiles for

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convenient

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.

Also

when

this

behaviour is sustained,

this

global warming has become more serious.

However

, if we practice diverse ways could be sensibly and easily tackled.