The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph below compares the change of
prices
in three Use synonyms
metals
(copper, nickel, zinc) in 2014, Use synonyms
according to
month.
Linking Words
Overall
, the three Linking Words
metals
' Use synonyms
prices
witnessed a dramatic fluctuation, declining in the first six months, Use synonyms
while
they became steady in the middle of the year and reversed to grow Linking Words
at the end
.
To be specific, regarding the nickel, it got the biggest change in January at 6%, which was three times higher than the cooper, at 2%, and both Linking Words
prices
reduced in the next two months, between 0% and 1%. In comparison with the two Use synonyms
metals
, zinc started at the smallest change at 1% in the first month. Use synonyms
Then
the price increased marginally to 3%, after which it kept going down to the same proportions as January, 1%.
Following that, all Linking Words
metals
(nickel, zinc, copper) in June reached the lowest Use synonyms
prices
at -3%, -1%, and -0.5%, respectively; Use synonyms
however
, afterwards, there were notable rises and Linking Words
then
which remained consistently at approximately between -1% to 1% from July to September. In November, these Linking Words
prices
seemed to restart climbing over 1% Use synonyms
at the end
of the given year, which saw huge price changes that may Linking Words
last
until next year.Linking Words
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