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Many governments think that economics progress is there most important goal some people fieber think that other type of progress are equally important for a country discuss both views and give your opinion

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 of a
country
is
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hinges on
the
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apply
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economic stability.
A large
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Large
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 governments believe that economic
development
 is one of the significant
purpose
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purposes
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 for a
country
,
whereas
other
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others
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 oppose and believe that there are many other leading aims
such
 as education, social connection,
political
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and political
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 stability are all the major goals for a
country
 rather than
to
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the
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ecnomic
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economic
 expansion. In
this
 essay both notions are explicated with
few
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a few
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pertinet
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pertinent
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further
 in my assertion economically advancement in
country
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the country
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 is
corelated
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correlated
 with all other facets of
state
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the state
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. To embark on,
a
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the
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 perspective of those who consider only economic
development
 is a profound goal of
governemnt
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government
 in
country
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a country
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. It would not be wrong to say
as
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that
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 all other aspects of a
country
 are based on the production and growth of economics. To
precise
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be precise
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more
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, if a
country
economically
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is economically
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 strong and balanced
consequently
, it automatically leads to the improvement
other
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of other
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 features in a region.
However
, only the
development
 of
economically
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an economically
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 safe and secure environment is not quite enough. It will not be a way to make the
people
 contented and happy. A
stand out
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 instance
is exist
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 in our own
country
, peoples' who belong to underprivileged families
does
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do
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 not know about the
state
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state's
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 economic situation, they only want some basic necessities of life. In these circumstances wherever
country
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the country
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 lies
government
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government's
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 goal
is
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should be
facilitate
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to facilitate
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 them.
Hence
, raising
such
 kind of cases emphasises
on
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the value of other
dimenisions
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dimensions
 of
country
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the country
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such
 as education, health, construction of
infrastrucure
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infrastructure
, transportation system
and
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agriculture etc. On the other side,
people's
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people
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 are completely right, the revolution in all other aspects of
country
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the country
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 rather
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than economics
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economics
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economic
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 stability is
also
 well concerned. In order that it is an obligation of
state
rulars
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rulers
 to play vital roles in these areas of
country
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the country
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 as well. In
this
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matter
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matters
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matters,
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 if
current
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the current
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government
 take
serions
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serious
 steps in the other sectors e.g. health, education, prosperity and
tranquality
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the quality
 of inhabitants it will be more lucarative
development
 in
country
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the country
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. Even though with the assistance of
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the country
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country
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country's
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people
government
 will be able to make
country
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the country
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 economically more
powefull
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powerful
.
People
 will pay taxes to the
government
,
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 when they see
rulars
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rulers
are
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working on our basic facets of life. All in all,
this
 controversial discussion in
upcoming
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the upcoming
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conclude
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concludes
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 that all dimensions, aspects and facets of a
country
 should be
lookafter
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looked after
 by the
state
government
 without
priortizing
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prioritizing
 any specific one as they are interlinked with
eachother
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each other
, and prominently, effects
on
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apply
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participants of
country
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the country
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.
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coherence cohesion
Focus on developing clear, separated paragraphs for each view discussed. Currently, ideas are somewhat jumbled, making it challenging for the reader to follow the logical structure of the essay.
coherence cohesion
For improved coherence and cohesion, work on using a wider range of linking words and phrases. This will help to better connect your ideas and make the essay flow more smoothly.
coherence cohesion
Introduce your essay with a clearer thesis statement that indicates your view and outline the structure of your essay. This will give the reader a clear understanding of what to expect and establish a direction for your essay.
task achievement
In order to fully address the task, make sure to discuss both views equally before providing your own opinion. Strengthen your essay by including more specific examples and details to support each viewpoint.
task achievement
Conclude your essay with a brief summary of the points discussed and reiterate your opinion. This ties the essay together and reinforces your stance on the issue.
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