The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps demonstrate transformations to the transport infrastructure that occurred around a city hospital from 2007 to 2010.

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, there were dramatic extensions of the parking and a bus station and roundabouts were

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added to facilitate access to the hospital. Starting with the picture of 2007, the city hospital was surrounded by Ring

Road

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which only connected to Hospital

Road

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in its south. There was

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City

Road

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that was in the far South perpendicular to Hospital

Road

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. Only one parking area existed for the staff and the public on the eastern side of Hospital

Road

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and six bus stops were located on both sides of the

road

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. Turning to the map of 2010, dynamic changes took place to increase more spaces for transportation.

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, the old parking area became exclusive to the staff and another place for vehicles was built to the east of the hospital off Ring

Road

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for public use.

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, a bus station was newly constructed across from the staff's parking area, to which two roundabouts built at both the north and south ends of Hospital

Road

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connected.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.

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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

185 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

infrastructure
improvements
facilitate
congestion
junctions
streamline
traffic flow
reduce congestion
public transport
bus station
efficiency
accessibility
parking facilities
car park
designated
alleviate
issues
adequate space
enhancements
overall accessibility
traffic management
convenience

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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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