The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps depict the changes in a town called Westley, comparing the situation in 1815 with today. There are several new facilities, including improvements in transportation questions and fewer field areas. In the transportation system, the most important change is a railroad crossing the city from North to South, with the Main Railway Station located in the Southwest, where before there were green
filds
Correct your spelling
fields
. Near the train station, nowadays, there is a new cinema and the road next was extended to a new area. In
this
area, towards the Southeast, there are shopping, business, and residential areas. In the city centre, the Market Square and the Town House remained the same,
however
, the church was converted into a Shopping Centre. The forest that was placed near Lake Lenton, was changed for a housing area. The old Coach Inn now is a Sports Centre and in front of it, was built a museum. In the Northeast, Lord Westley's house does not exist anymore. In the same place, in the current days, there are The Red Lion and the Lenton Hotel, on the path to Tinton Village.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • residential area
  • amenities
  • thoroughfare
  • connectivity
  • industrial development
  • factory
  • public amenities
  • recreational facilities
  • educational facilities
  • residential expansion
  • apartment blocks
  • commercial activity
  • shopping centers
  • restaurants
  • single-family homes
  • development
  • open field
  • noticeable change
  • replacing
  • establishment
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