The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph illustrates the number of

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, in hundreds, visiting a UK

museum

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in two specific seasons of the year 2005.

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, there were significantly more

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coming to the

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in the winter than they did in the summer. Most visitors gathered at the

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in the morning and gradually became fewer in the afternoon. In the winter, the total number of

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being attracted to the

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increased sharply from 0 at the opening time to reaching a peak of about 1500 at noon. After that, it steadily went down for the rest of the day with a moderate fluctuation between 12 o'

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and 16 o'

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. In the summer, there were considerably fewer visitors paying a visit to watch exhibits with 400

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recorded at 10 o'

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, only

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winter time

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figure remained unchanged in the next hour before climbing to 600 at 12 o'

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. In the afternoon session, fewer and fewer

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museum goers

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were recorded at the scene, dropping from 600 to 0 at 15 o'

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. The next 3 hours before closing recorded no new visitors.