The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph illustrates the number of
people
, in hundreds, visiting a UK museum
in two specific seasons of the year 2005.
Overall
, there were significantly more people
coming to the museum
in the winter than they did in the summer. Most visitors gathered at the museum
in the morning and gradually became fewer in the afternoon.
In the winter, the total number of people
being attracted to the museum
increased sharply from 0 at the opening time to reaching a peak of about 1500 at noon. After that, it steadily went down for the rest of the day with a moderate fluctuation between 12 o'clock
and 16 o'clock
.
In the summer, there were considerably fewer visitors paying a visit to watch exhibits with 400 people
recorded at 10 o'clock
, only a
half of that Correct article usage
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in
winter time
. Correct your spelling
wintertime
This
figure remained unchanged in the next hour before climbing to 600 at 12 o'clock
. In the afternoon session, fewer and fewer museum goers
were recorded at the scene, dropping from 600 to 0 at 15 o'Add a hyphen
museum-goers
clock
. The next 3 hours before closing recorded no new visitors.Submitted by nha7032463 on
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