The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region.

The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region.
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The bar chart presents the number of people and wealth proportion for eight regions in one particular year.
Overall
, it is noticeable that there was a considerable gap between the former and the ladder presentations. Since the majority of areas contributed the most significant percentages of wealth share; meanwhile, the minority did not so. On the one hand, in terms of citizen population, North America, Europe, and Rich Asia-Pacific took the lead, accounting for just under 35%, nearly 30%, and over 20%, respectively, which made them become the big three.
In contrast
, at the lowest level, Africa and India shared roughly 0.5%,
while
the remained group went into approximately 3.5%.
On the other hand
, in terms of wealth share, surprisingly, China was superior, reaching almost a quarter of the total number,
whereas
Europe, India, and the Other Asia-Pacific could only land below 20%.
Finally
, the rest of the regions kept up their number at 7.5%, on average.
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