Many people are supportive of the opinion that young children should study at home, because there are so many problems in schools nowadays. To what extent do you agree?

Currently, a variety of human beings

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on the view that

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their youngsters ought to learn at their houses.

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, others realize that

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there

some

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difficulties

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the school

campass

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campus

compass

campuses

these days.

Hence

, I personally, disagree with

this

statement because students will get more education and communication skills when they are learning at colleges rather than at their apartments.

To begin

with, studying at university, juveniles will meet with new colleagues and share some different ideas

as well as

concepts.

Furthermore

, adolescents can get more skills from schools,

for instance

, how to communicate with tutors in person and even the college committee.

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is because

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teenagers at their homegrounds

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could not meet with the headmasters or any other staff members.

Therefore

, it is very important if a child

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to visit college

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studying

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online classes through Zoom.

Additionally

,

although

some problems will happen at schools,

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there are open

gounds

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grounds

for

sporting

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and exercises compared to

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the home

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area.

Moreover

, at universities, teenagers can practise many types of

atheletics

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athletics

due to

bigger pitches whilst at hostels there is a limited space for doing

such

a thing.An example to illustrate that could be my native city, those who are always on

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compass

campus

are now expects

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of football

as well as

jumping.

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those who are at

their

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homes

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do the same,

this

is because of some other disturbances occurred

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their families

such

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up

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the whole indoors which is unhealthy.

To conclude

,

instead

of studying at

house

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the house

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, young children should do their studies at school to get many skills and meet

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new friends for

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sake of communication.I, totally disagree with the point that

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students to learn

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.