The pie chart show the reasons for immigrations to and from the UK in 2007

The pie chart show the reasons for immigrations to and from the UK in 2007
The pie chart given illustrates the reasons why people moved to the UK and moved away from it in 2007. From an
overall
perspective, it is evident that the proportion of individuals who changed their places for definite jobs occupied a major purpose in both immigration and
emigration
. Meanwhile, the data on formal study was the lowest value in
emigration
. As can be seen in the immigration chart, the percentage of citizens who went to the UK to take definite jobs was the highest, at 30%, compared to 26% in that of formal study.
Furthermore
, the figures for accompany/join, looking for work and other were lower, at 15%, 12%, and 11%, in the given order. No reason stated,
however
, accounted for the lowest proportion, at only 6%. In terms of the
emigration
statistics, the proportion of emigrants who left their country to have decent occupations and look for work were 29% and 22%, respectively.
Moreover
, the data on no reason stated and other were 18% and 14%, in turn.
In addition
, accompany/join was the aim of 14% of the total emigrants, and formal study was the least attractive target in
emigration
, at 4%.
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