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The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
#show #changes #ownership #appliances #amount #time #housework #households #country
In
this
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chart
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charts
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charts,
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 we can observe the changes
percentage
 of ownership of electrical
devices
,
in addition
 to
number
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a number
the number
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 of
hours
 of
house work
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housework
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 per
household
 per week. There are three
devices
are
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in
percentage
 of ownership per
household
 which are, refrigerators,
vaccum
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vacuum
 cleaners and
also
 washing machines. In 1920 almost zero
percent
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per cent
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 of houses owned refrigerators
while
vaccum
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vacuum
 cleaners and washing machines were at thirty and forty
percent
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per cent
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. Refrigerators with the biggest
percentage
 incline
was
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were
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 the first electrical device out of these three
devices
 which reached one hundred
percent
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per cent
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at
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in
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 1980. The next electrical device to be
at
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in
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 all houses, was almost 20 years later
at
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in
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 2000. Washing machines
with
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in contrast
 to the highest
percentage
 in 1920
,
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 had not reached 100
percent
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per cent
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yet
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apply
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untill
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until
 2019 and is around 70
percent
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per cent
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 in 2019. Despite the
increase
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increased
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number
 of electrical
devices
 in
previous
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the previous
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 chart, the
number
 of
hours
 of chores in each
house hold
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household
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 had been reclining since 1920. The highest
hours
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number of hours
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were
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apply
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put
to
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into
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 housework was at 1920 with 50
hours
 per
household
 and the lowest
number
 of
hours
 put
to
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into
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 housework were 10
hours
. With the increasing
number
 of electrical
devices
 in each
household
 to more than 70
percent
 the
hours
 of housework had been lowered to 10
hours
 per week per
household
.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, devices, number, hours, household, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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