You have reccently moved to another city but your bank has your old address and continues to send all the communication there. Write a letter to your bank Branch. In this letter mention: -Where you have moved? -What problem are you facing regarding the bank's communication? -What do you want them to do regarding old communication already sent to the wrong address

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Dear Sir or Madam, The reason I am writing you

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letter is as I am sorry for the Branch.I would like to

communication

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them

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again, but I do not have the opportunity.

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is why I want to disconnect. Already sent me the wrong address. When I stayed here in Branch. I had two houses

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because my father bequeathed me

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house, That's why

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of my houses

have

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problem

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with the bank, I am unhappy because it is a big

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, I can manage the

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I went to Branch as my father left me an inheritance from there.

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year I had a lot of

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problem

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, there is a

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with the bank and there is a

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with the documents of

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of my

house

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. I need a lot of people to help me, as I need someone to show me the way.

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step at a time, I will find a solution to the

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. If anyone can help me, I would appreciate it. I am waiting for your reply. Yours faithfully, Rustamova Dilnoza.

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task achievement

Ensure clarity and relevance in your letter. Focus on the task at hand, which is to inform your bank about your new address and request action regarding previous communications sent to the wrong address.

coherence cohesion

Structure your letter logically. Start with an introduction, followed by a paragraph explaining your current situation, then describe the problem, and conclude with what you expect the bank to do.

task achievement

Adopt a more formal tone suitable for writing to a bank. Avoid using overly casual language or irrelevant information that does not directly address the issue at hand.

coherence cohesion

Use paragraphs effectively to separate different ideas or parts of your message. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea or aspect of the situation.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

183 words

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