Topic 9: In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

With the help of
technology
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the world has come a long way
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today's scenario people's
lifestyle
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has be
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changed a lot from the past .
Internet
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pays
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plays
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a part and parcel role in our
life
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lives
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. People can find anything
from
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the internet without getting out
from
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them
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home . One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people who believe that in
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future
newspaper
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will be totally replaced by the online news platform . There is a range of conflicting arguments related to the assertion . As far as
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can see it
more
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justified to say that it's quite possible that in
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future we can see the
internet
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taking over printing
newspaper
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or books .
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support
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grammar
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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