he chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The pie chart illustrates the results of
survey
in one African state about the main reasons for using smartphones for pupils from 2016 to 2019. Add an article
the survey
a survey
Overall
, it clearly can be seen that there were two main reasons for using gadgets in African
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Africa
Moreover
, digital camera
and phone calls Fix the agreement mistake
cameras
not
contribute as much to the other activities.
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did not
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terms of the main reason Correct article usage
apply
using
smartphones, the percentage of social media Change preposition
for using
stand
at 50% in 2016Wrong verb form
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,
and Remove the comma
apply
go
downWrong verb form
went
2
% in 2017, and Change preposition
by 2
the
next two years in 2019 Change preposition
in the
were
Unnecessary verb
apply
incresead
until the Correct your spelling
increased
last
year at 56%. Howerver
, in 2016 Correct your spelling
However
email
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emails
make
up 20% and Wrong verb form
made
relatively
stable until 2018, before Add a missing verb
were relatively
go
down around 1% in 2019.
Regarding Change the form of the verb
going
to
the Remove the preposition
apply
others reason
, in 2016 digital Fix the agreement mistake
other reasons
camera
accounted for 18%, and in the next two years Fix the agreement mistake
cameras
go
down to 3% and increased Verb problem
they went
one fifth
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one-fifth
at
the final year. Change preposition
in
Moreover
, phone calls make up 10% in the first year, and go up in 2017 and 2018 to 11%. But, in 2019 hitting a trough to
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