he chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

he chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The pie chart illustrates the results of
survey
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in one African state about the main reasons for using smartphones for pupils from 2016 to 2019.
Overall
, it clearly can be seen that there were two main reasons for using gadgets in
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Africa
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.
Moreover
, digital
camera
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cameras
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and phone calls
not
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do not
did not
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contribute as much to the other activities. In
the
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terms of the main reason
using
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smartphones, the percentage of social media
stand
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stood
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at 50% in 2016
,
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apply
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and
go
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down
2
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by 2
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% in 2017, and
the
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in the
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next two years in 2019
were
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incresead
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increased
until the
last
year at 56%.
Howerver
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However
, in 2016
email
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emails
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make
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made
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up 20% and
relatively
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were relatively
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stable until 2018, before
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down around 1% in 2019. Regarding
to
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the
others reason
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other reasons
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, in 2016 digital
camera
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cameras
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accounted for 18%, and in the next two years
go
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they went
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down to 3% and increased
one fifth
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at
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the final year.
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, phone calls make up 10% in the first year, and go up in 2017 and 2018 to 11%. But, in 2019 hitting a trough
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5%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover".
Vocabulary: The word "go down" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • noticeable shift
  • communication preferences
  • considerably declined
  • functionalities
  • reflecting global trends
  • emerging trend
  • educational use of technology
  • diversification
  • traditional communication
  • digital forms of communication
  • instant messaging
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