The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
The table illustrates how many people visited Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after refurbishment
whereas
the pie charts demonstrate the results of visitors
’ satisfaction rates which were asked in surveys throughout the same two periods. Overall
, the total number of visitors
experienced growth and they became more satisfied after redecoration.
Regarding the table, the entire number of visitors
to Ashdown Museum saw a notable rise after redecorating, with the rate ending up 92,000 people in a year.
According to
the pie charts, the percentage of dissatisfied visitors
who constituted the highest figure before renewing decreased significantly from 40% to 15%. Both very satisfied and satisfied visitors
witnessed an increase, while
the proportion of the former one
climbed remarkably by 20%, that of the latter Correct pronoun usage
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first place, accounting for 40% after the museum was refurbished. The remaining Correct article usage
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visitors
who were very disappointed and had no response still comprised the least significance which was Correct article usage
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