Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought over the world. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?

In recent times, there has been an increase in
people
purchasing
food
at restaurants but being unable to finish it, resulting in
food
wastage
.
This
is mainly
due to
huge
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the huge
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appitite
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appetite
to eat but they cannot complete the whole portion that they ordered.
This
issue can be resolved by educating
people
about the
wastage
. One of the significant
problem
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problems
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with
food
hotels is
wastage
. Generally, in many
places
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places,
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people
orders
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order
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more than three items
in
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on
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the menu.
Although
, they cannot finish all the dishes that they
orderd
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ordered
but
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people
want to
experinces
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experience
the taste of the dish.
Moreover
, the
left overs
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leftovers
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cannot be taken home because they spoil quickly.
Therefore
,
people
throw
the
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away the
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remaining
food
,
causes
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causing
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food
wastage
.
For example
, recent studies in India
shows
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show
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that 60% of
the
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apply
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food
wastage
is
due to
the
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apply
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people
ordering more
number of
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apply
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items than their hunger. One of the possible
solution
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solutions
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for
this
issue
to
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is to
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give
awarness
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awareness
to the public. There are plenty
problems
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of problems
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associated with
soplied
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spoiled
supplied
food
this
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apply
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such
as pollution,
increase
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an increase
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in
insets
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insects
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and
deseases
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diseases
.
However
, many individuals are not aware of these problems. In every
food
place
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place,
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there should be an
advertisment
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advertisement
of
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for
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these problems. Government should allocate funds and run social
campaines
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campaigns
.
For example
, In
India
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India,
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one restaurant charges more if the customer
leave
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leaves
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any
food
item that they order.
To conclude
, customers play an important role in wasting
food
by ordering more,
however
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however,
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this
can be taken care
by
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of by
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providing valuable education to the
people
for
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about
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this
problem.
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  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • over-purchasing
  • food storage
  • premature spoilage
  • cultural norms
  • meals
  • portion sizes
  • aesthetic standards
  • edible
  • discarded
  • busy lifestyles
  • expiring
  • going bad
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