The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
The bar chart shows some changes in the proportion of
people
who were born in Australia
and who were born in other regions between 1995 and 2010.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that most people
were born in cities whereas
people
who were born in towns and rural areas were less than the
others.
In 1995, Correct article usage
apply
people
who were born in cities outside Australia
accounted for nearly 60% while
the percentage reached a peak of 80% in 2005. The number of births in rural areas of other countries accounted for 40% , then
declined to just under 10%. The figure for towns made up approximately 10%, then
declined by twice to roughly 5%.
The proportion of residents of Australia
who were born in cities was 50% in 1995 while
the figure declined marginally in 2010. 20% of people
were born in towns in Australia
at the beginning of the period but it decreased to just over 10%. The percentage of rural areas declined significantly from about 30% to around 18%.Submitted by writingbhos on
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