The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade- labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five european countries

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade- labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five european countries
The table illustrates the information of
sales
proportion in two various edible products
such
as Fairtrade coffee and
bananas
in different five European nations in 1999 and 2004. Units are measured by millions of euros.
Overall
,
it is clear that
bananas
'
sales
proportions were the highest than coffee. In detail, in terms of coffee, in 1999, Switzerland had the highest
sales
and it doubled in 2004, at £3 and 6
million
. Denmark was placed second place on
sales
in 1999 and it increased slightly, which was 1.8 and 2
million
.
Similarly
, the UK had only 1.5 in 1999
then
it grew significantly by 20
million
.
Likewise
, Belgium and Sweden
also
rose than the previous period of
sales
, from 1 to 1.7
million
and 0.8 to 1 respectively.
Furthermore
, in terms of
bananas
, Switzerland had the highest
sales
in the given periods, it increased drastically from 15
million
in 1999 to 47
million
in 2004. In the same manner, the UK and Belgium had grown than
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previous period, from 1 to 5.5
million
and 0.6 to 4
million
respectively.
In contrast
, Sweden and Denmark decreased the
sales
of
bananas
in the previous period, it fell from 1.8 to 1 and 2 to 0.9 respectively.
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