The diagram indicates the life process of the honey bee
A glance at the diagram provided the life circle of
honey
bees
which takes 34 to 36 days
from laying eggs
to maturity.
Overall
, there are five steps in the life circle. In the beginning, the process commences with laying eggs
and ends with mature honey
bees
.
According to
the information shown in the diagram, female honey
bees
lay one or two eggs
every three days
and those eggs
will hatch after 9 to 10 days
. After hatching, there will be a three-time moult procedure before nymphs grow into young adults which they will spend 5 days
on the first time, 7 days
on the second time and 9 days
on the third time. Afterwards, young adults will emerge and then
spend 4 days
turning into mature honey
bees
.Finally
,the circle starts anew.
To sum up
, it can be apparently seen that the period from young adults to maturity is relatively shorter than the hatching process and the moult period which is the longest procedure in the life of honey
bees
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