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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade- labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five european countries

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade- labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five european countries
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The table illustrates the data about the expenditure of Fairtrade
labeled
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coffee
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 and bananas in the
UK
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, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden in 1999 and 2004.
Overall
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, the maximum number of
sales
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 of
coffee
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 and bananas were seen in the
UK
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 and Switzerland in 2004(20
million
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euros
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 and 47
million
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euros
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).
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 the lowest value of
coffee
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sales
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 and banana
sales
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 was seen in Sweden(0.8
million
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euros
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) and Belgium(0.6
million
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euros
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) throughout the given period. In 1999, the sale of Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
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 in the
UK
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 was just 1.5
million
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euros
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. In 2004, it increased to 20
million
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euros
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 which is the highest
sales
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 number in the
UK
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. In Switzerland, the cost of
coffee
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 in 1999 was 3
million
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euros
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 which doubled in 2004. In terms of bananas, the sale of
coffee
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 in 1999 was 15
million
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euros
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, and that
sales
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 tripled in 2004. Belgium and the
UK
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 had just 0.6 and 1
million
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 euro banana
sales
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 in 1999 which rapidly increased in 2004. Sweden and Denmark were the only two countries whose banana
sales
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 decreased in
period
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the period
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 given.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, uk, sales, million, euros with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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