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Is it important to be ethical all the time.' What are the advantages and disadvantages of being ethical all the time?

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Why is it important to be ethical at all times -
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 question that I will give my opinion and only my opinion
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 the advantages and disadvantages. The word ethical is of Greek ethos meaning ' moral character' which
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 behaviour - being honest, fair and truthful. Many people are ethical through their jobs
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doctor
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judge
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minister
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 and follow
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 so there can be no come back on them in their chosen profession even if ,
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 a patient is abusive or rude to their Doctor, that medical professional will still treat their patient fairly
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however
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feel. The disadvantage to being ethical all the time is that a person can be taken advantage of by
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 full well that it doesn't matter how offensive or rude they are they will still be treated fairly , and
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 daily issue for the
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 work professionals, but the same can be said for a vicar or minister who
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 always ethical within their work. I have no actual examples to give as
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 have not been in a situation to give any but I can honestly say I am not 100% ethical myself but
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 do feel I am reasonably fair and just until I am crossed. Is it important to be ethical all the time, it may well be but as we all know it isn't always possible to be so unless you have sworn an oath to be so.
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