The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans.
The given picture explains the way in which aluminium cans are recycled.
Overall
,what stands out from the diagram is that it is a cyclical process that comprises several main stages,such
as collection,cleaning,compressing,heating,sorting,rolling and recycling.
The procedure commences when people throw aluminium products after they utilize them for some purposes,following which they are collected from there by trucks and transferred to the special machine.Next,through the use of this
tool,these cans are cleaned,sorted,shredded and compressed.To subsequent this
step,they are heated at high temperatures and melted which makes it easier to roll them.This
is followed by rolling them and its thickness varies between 2.5mm and 6mm.Finally
,after cans are recycled,they are available for customers to use again and the recycling process of a quarter of them starts over again.Submitted by writingbhos on
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