The best way to reduce emissions from vehicles is to impose a higer tax on vehicles which use a lot of fuel and lower tax on those that don't. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, because of
the
global warming, the emission of Correct article usage
apply
vehicles
becomes
a serious problem for every Wrong verb form
has become
nations
all over the world, some Change to a singular noun
nation
people
think it is the best way
to make those who drive traditional vehicles
to
pay more Fix the infinitive
apply
tax
than those who drive elecronic
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electric
electronic
cars
. To be honest, I share a different opinion.
I regard we have to admit that, vehicles
which use fuel
did influnced
our Correct your spelling
influenced
influence
evirnoment
a lot, and it is a good Correct your spelling
environment
way
to impose tax
on those drivers. The action of Add an article
a tax
add
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adding
tax
maybe can
reduce some Wrong verb form
may
emission
from those Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
vehicles
, but I have to say the effect will be limited.
For one thing,if the tax
policy was acted, it will
lower the life quality ofWrong verb form
would
working class
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working-class
people
while
the rich people
won't feel much difference. The users of fuel powered
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fuel-powered
vehicles
a lot are usually whealthy
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wealthy
healthy
people
, especially those who drives
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drive
cars
like landrovers
and fancy race Correct your spelling
land rovers
landrover
cars
, these cars
bruns
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burn
way
more fuel
per meils
than ordinary Correct your spelling
meals
cars
. For working
class Change preposition
Working
people
, they won't need a tax
to make them change their old car
to Fix the agreement mistake
cars
elechronic
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electronic
cars
. So that
, Correct determiner usage
apply
tax
on fuel powered
Add a hyphen
fuel-powered
vehicles
might not be very useful.
One thing for another, if government
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the government
dose
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does
imposed
the Wrong verb form
impose
tax
, the question to be asked is what will government
do with the incomeAdd an article
the government
.
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?
Government
held elections every 4 or 5 years in most of Add an article
The government
countries
. It usually takes years to pass the law about the Add an article
the countries
tax
, and tax
on every fuel powered
car driver for 1 or 2 years, Add a hyphen
fuel-powered
then
they hold a relection
, new Correct your spelling
selection
reflection
government
maybe the
axe the Correct article usage
apply
tax
, because the citizens elect them for that. After all these
, Correct pronoun usage
this
those
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the
tax
money will be used on other things.
In conclusion, to reduce the traditional
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number of traditional
vehicles
users the best Change the noun form
vehicle
way
is not to add tax
on them. There are many other ways like developing new cars
use
electricity and Wrong verb form
using
let
Wrong verb form
letting
people
know about our environment via news or education. Pleople
will Correct your spelling
People
atomaticaly
change their car if new Correct your spelling
automatically
elechronic
Correct your spelling
electronic
cars
are more advance
and more Correct word choice
advanced
econimical
friendly to them.Correct your spelling
economical
economically
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