The chart below show the percentage of second language classes taken by Australian secondary school students in two different cities in 2017
The given pie charts compare the information about the proportion of second
language
classes
was
taken by secondary school children in Unnecessary verb
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Melbourne
and Sydney
in 2017.
Overall
, it is clear that
Mandarin and Japanese language
classes
were by far the most popular among secondary pupils in both towns, while
Italian was taken more in Melbourne
than in Sydney
.
According to
the data, the percentage of Mandarin lessons accounted for 40%, additionally
Japanese Add a comma
additionally,
classes
comprised just a quarter in Melbourne
. The secondary language
classes
with the lowest percentage were Indonesian and others at 10%. Finally
, 15% of Italian language
classes
was
chosen by secondary school learners in Change the verb form
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Melbourne
in 2017.
It is clear that
almost half of secondary pupils from Sydney
prefer learning Mandarin language
, however
there in ten of them chose Japanese. The percentage of other language
classes
was just 15% in Sydney
. The figures for Indonesia and Italian classes
stood at the same per cent (5%)Submitted by ina1_95 on
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