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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting
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The bar chart shows information regarding the annual revenue of
families
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 in the United States 4
years
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 apart starting in the year 2007 and ending in 2015.
Overall
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, the data presents an increase in annual profit of American
families
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 earning 100,000
dollars
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 or more from 2007 to 2015
whereas
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 households accumulating more than 50,000 but less than 100,00SUD yearly showed a constant number throughout the
years
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 but
then
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 an influx of
families
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 earning equal to and less than 49,000
dollars
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 in a period of 8
years
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. In 2007, pertaining to
families
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 having a yearly revenue of 100,000
dollars
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 or more, it stood at about 29
million
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 households and jumped to more than 30
million
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 in the span of 8
years
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.
However
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, the chart showed a slight decrease in 2011 at about 27
million
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 and
families
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 earning in the range of 25,000 USD overtook the highest position roughly at 30
million
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 and at close second are earners with less than 25,000
dollars
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 with approximately 29
million
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 households.
On the other hand
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, the annual revenue of
families
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 earning in the range of 50,000
dollars
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 to 74,999
dollars
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 and 75,000 USD to 99,999 USD remained constant in the span of 8
years
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 which were approximately equal and less than 15
million
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 for the former and about 21
million
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 respectively for their 12-month earnings as a family

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words families, years, dollars, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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