The table gives information about enrollment of students in Manchester University in 1937, 1963 and 2017. The table gives information about enrollment of students in Manchester University in 1937, 1963 and 2017.

The table gives information about enrollment of students in Manchester University in 1937, 1963 and 2017.

The table gives information about enrollment of students in Manchester University in 1937, 1963 and 2017.
The given table illustrates the enrollment of different
students
in Manchester University, from
1937to
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1937 to
2017.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that the highest number of
student
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that had been enrolled was in 2017.
According to
what is shown, in 1937 there were 327 new
students
in the university, just above half of that
percentage
were males, and 45% were females.
However
, the
percentage
of
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who came from within 40 miles of Manchester were the same
percentage
of males.
In addition
,
students
who came to study abroad were a really small
percentage
just 6%, and it was from 4 countries.In 2017, there was a similarity in the numbers.As the
the
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percentage
of
the
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students
who came to study
were
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the same just the
percentage
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the opposite.
Whereas
,
students
who were close to Manchester were only 1-2%.
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