The diagram shows how apple is canned. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates the entire development from apple production to canning. It is a manual, industrial step involving 14 stages, from picking the
apples
in the orchard to the delivery process.
Use synonyms
To begin
with, the Linking Words
apples
are collected by people with their hands, Use synonyms
then
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those
are transported to the factory, where they are washed and cleaned to eliminate dirt and improve their quality. Correct pronoun usage
they
After
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this
Linking Words
apples
are stored in a special cold system to be preserved. Use synonyms
Consequently
, they are put on a scale weighed and they are classified Linking Words
according to
size. After that, they go through the peeling area and Linking Words
then
they are corning and slicing.
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In addition
, the Linking Words
apples
are canning and sealing where they go directly to the cooking and sterilization area. After they get cold it is necessary to label the product. To finish the canned process the product is stored until it has to be delivered.Use synonyms
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words apples with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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