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Artificial intelligence will soon replace teachers in the classroom. Do you agree with this statement? What is an alternative to traditional face to face teaching? Write the whole essay using everything you’ve learned to write a Band 7 essay.

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It is believed that artificial
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intelligence
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 learning methods. I completely agree with
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 with relevant illustrations. First and foremost, artificial
intelligence
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 transformed learning methods by providing reliable
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 within seconds.
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 of
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 contemporary technology, learning become more convenient,
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students
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 can access reliable
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 using free applications
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 as Chat GPT or Gemini.
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bygone
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 days learners had to search
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information
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the internet
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internet
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,
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undeniably
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, all
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 the internet is not reliable.
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, complex mathematical equations can be solved using
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 cutting-edge technology
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students
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 is improved.
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, another advantage of artificial
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homeschooling
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possible for scholars around the world without any geographical barrier. In detail, in traditional education methods, the
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students
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 physical presence is required to provide appropriate education.
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artificial
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,
students
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 can tailor their educational
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 and learn
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their
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home which is beneficial for
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students
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 who are living in remote villages.
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, artificial
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 enables
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 effective learning
system
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systems
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.
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artifical
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artificial
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intract
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interact
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students
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 with more
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 than a teacher can perform. In conclusion, artificial
intelligence
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learning
 not only accessible but
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cutting edge
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 technology helps to break geographical
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 by providing
tilored
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tailored
 learning modules. Ergo, I believe that the invention of
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artificial
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intelligence
 is positively
tranformed
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transformed
 our educational system.

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coherence cohesion
Ensure a more varied and complex sentence structure throughout the essay for improved coherence. This can include using a mix of simple, compound, and complex sentences to make your points more clearly and engagingly.
coherence cohesion
While supporting main points with examples is key, consider including more detailed and varied examples to strengthen your argument. This could involve citing specific studies, statistics, or real-world cases where artificial intelligence has impacted learning effectively.
task achievement
To enhance task achievement, ensure that every paragraph directly addresses the question posed by the topic. Each paragraph should clearly state how it relates to your stance on artificial intelligence replacing teachers, and provide concrete evidence or reasoning to support this.
task achievement
Ensure your essay fully covers all aspects of the question, including alternatives to traditional face-to-face teaching, beyond just the focus on AI. Expanding on various alternatives can provide a more rounded and complete response.
general
Pay attention to spelling, grammar, and punctuation. Minor errors can distract the reader and detract from the overall quality of your essay. Consider using tools or seeking help to proofread your work before final submission.
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