The graph shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon.
The line graph illustrates
population
Correct article usage
the population
growth
of three particular countries in the U.S
state of Oregon over a period of time from 1940 to 2000.
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U.S.
Overall
, the number of
Correct quantifier usage
apply
population
on
Columbia, Yamhill, and Washington Change preposition
of
are
increased between 1940 and 2000. Starting with the steady Unnecessary verb
apply
growth
from 1940 to 1970, the number of population
Add an article
the population
have
Change the verb form
has
largest
increase between 1970 and 2000, soaring dramatically to its peak.
Columbia and Yamhill Change the article
the largest
have
a similar Wrong verb form
had
number of
Correct quantifier usage
apply
population
throughout the entire time-frame
, both countries Correct your spelling
time frame
have
around 30,000 people in 1940. Wrong verb form
had
This
figure witnessed a steady growth
to reach approximately 50% increase in population
in 1970, before experiencing its largest growth
of around 100% between 1970 and 2000. Similarly
, Washington was having
Wrong verb form
had
growth
for
about 60% and 110% from 1940 to 1970 and from 1970 to 2000, respectively.
Washington Change preposition
of
exceeds
around 45,000 people from Columbia and Yamhill in 1940. As the Wrong verb form
exceeded
population
growth
from 1940 to 2000, the gap rose significantly to about 150,000 in 2000.Replace the word
grew
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, growth with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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