The graph below shows the cosumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in European countru 1979 and 2004

The graph below shows the cosumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in European countru 1979 and 2004
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The line graph illustrates 3 kinds of meat and
fish
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being consumed by some countries in Europe from 1979 to 2004.
Overall
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, despite the popularity of
beef
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at the start of the year, it started to decline significantly
along with
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fish
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and lamb
while
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chicken rose dramatically throughout the period. In 1979,
beef
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was the most popular meat by consumers which stood at more than 200
grams
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sold per week.
This
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was far higher than lamb and chicken, which both were eaten about 150
grams
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per 7 days.
Whereas
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fish
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was the least consumed among all of them with less than 100 gms per person.
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, as the
years
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went by,
beef
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drastically dropped in 1994 sold only approximately 160
grams
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, met a minimal rise until 1989 and plummeted to only 100
grams
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in 2004.
On the other hand
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, chicken's popularity among consumers steadily increased from 150 to 200
grams
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in 20
years
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. It steadily grew and overtook
beef
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in 1994,
then
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rapidly rose from 1999, and peaked in 2004 with about 250
grams
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being sold per week. Both lamb and
fish
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slowly declined throughout the
years
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, with the former marked a decrease to less than a hundred
grams
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eaten and the latter with less than 50
grams
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consumed after 15
years
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, beef, grams, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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