Your friend is about to celebrate a landmark birthday and would welcome suggestions as to how it should be celebrated. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say what type of party should be held e.g. themed, fancy dress, black tie event • suggest a suitable venue • make recommendations as to entertainment e.g. DJ, jazz band You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear...,
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Dear Adithya,
I hope everything is going great with you. I am glad that your landmark birthday is coming up in a couple of weeks. I am really excited that you're turning 21
this
year. I am writing this
letter to suggest some extraordinary ideas for your special day.
It would be great if you conduct a comic-themed party which will include all superheroes like Iron Man, spiderman, Captain America, Thor and others. I came up with this
idea because the Avengers movie is yet to be released on the day of your birthday.
The Empire State Building in New York will be a perfect place to celebrate your special day. Also
, it is more affordable when compared to other venues.
For the
entertainment, if we have a DJ at night I will help you find a rocking DJ for Correct article usage
apply
this
special occasion. It would be great to have a dance floor where we could finish the party with fun and entertainment.
I am wishing you a happy 21st birthday in advance.
With love and regards,
Sathish RaghumaniSubmitted by insighttribez on
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task achievement
You have done an excellent job of addressing all parts of the task. However, the suggestion about the venue, the Empire State Building, might be a bit unrealistic for a personal party. Consider suggesting a more practical venue to enhance the task response.
coherence cohesion
Your letter is generally well-organized, but there's room for smoother transitions between the suggestions. For example, linking the theme to the venue could provide a more seamless flow.
task achievement
You have effectively used a friendly and personal tone that is suitable for writing to a friend.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph focuses on a single idea, which helps in maintaining clarity.
coherence cohesion
You have opened and closed the letter appropriately, which adds a nice touch to the overall coherence.