Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in order for them to continue with their work.

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Historically,

art

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has been widely recognized owing to its

favorable

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impact among

socities

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societies

and its advancements have had an exponential

grown

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, it is well-known that in many countries

artists

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have not received fair stipends.

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this

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reason, they should

received

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receive

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financial aid from not only non-profit organizations but

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the

goverment

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government

. I partially agree with

this

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because

instead

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of obtaining

subsidy

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, the

goverment

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government

should guarantee better wages in

this

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profession.

Firtsly

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, there have been created many ways to illustrate or

perfom

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perform

art

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such

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theatre, sculpture, painting, etc.

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, students of

art

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and people who already work as

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an artist

artists

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artists

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should

spent

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spend

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money by buying

respective

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the respective

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materials that are required to carry out

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its

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perfomances

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performance

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, wages are not enough neither for basic daily requirements

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for purchasing items. As a

consecuence

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consequence

, many non-profit organizations have helped and supplied these

condition

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conditions

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, and in many

cases

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cases,

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artists

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must apply

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for

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apply

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scholarships or

governamental

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governmental

financial contributions is vital in order to reach their goals.

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, if in many other employments and professions are provided mandatory

equipments

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equipment

types of equipment

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to complete the tasks, in the artistic field

also

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should be done.

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, in Colombia, most of the

artists

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must obtain financial

sponsor

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Your opinion

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

305 words

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