The graph below show the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007

The graph below show the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007
The line graph depicts the
intake
of 3 spreads in a period of 26 years, between 1982 and 2007. 
Overall
,
while
low fat
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low-fat
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and reduced spreads
shows
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show
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an upward trend during the period, Margarine and butter show a declining trend. The consumption of
low fat
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and reduced spreads started at approximately 10
grams
in 1996 which was the lowest
intake
compared to margarine and butter.
However
, it soared
at
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to
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80
grams
in 5 years time before
sligtly
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slightly
decline
at
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to
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just over 70
grams
in 2007.
On the other hand
, Margarine used to be the most favorite spread
which
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with
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intake
was
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just above 10
grams
in 1981. It
then
reached its highest
intake
in 1986 before
declined
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declining
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significantly years after and the
intake
was above 50
grams
in 2007. Meanwhile, the butter
intake
also
started relatively high at almost 100
grams
in 1981.
However
, it
experience
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experienced
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fluctuation over the period and
decline
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declined
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to the point of 40
grams
in 2007.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words intake, grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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