The diagram shows how apple is canned. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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A glance at the diagram provided the process of canning

apples

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which is from hand picking to despatch.

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, there are 14 steps.In the beginning, it commences with hand picking and the following steps are transporting, washing, the quality check, cold storing, weighing , peeling, corning, canning,sealing, cooking, labelling, storage and ends with despatch.

According to

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the information shown in the diagram, the picked

apples

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will be transported to be washed before the quality inspection. There will be a cold storing procedure for the qualified

apples

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. Afterwards, they will be graded before being peeled.

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, the peeled

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will be sliced in order to be canned.Those containers will be sealed and cooked for sterilization.When the sterilizing procedure is completed, the containers will be

labeled

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and put into the storage area.

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, they will be despatched.

To sum up

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, it can be apparently seen that there is a lot of work before the despatch of canned

apples

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words apples with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

155 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

canning process
systematic nature
ripe apples
preservatives
sterilization
distribution
technology-intensive
longevity
quality control
packaging
hygiene standards

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