You are planning a two-week vacation and need someone to take care of your pet while you are away. Write a letter to your cousin. In your letter -Tell your cousin that you are going on a vacation -Ask your cousin to take care of your pet for you -Explain what tasks you would like your cousin to do

Dear Biscou, I hope you're well . I'm writing because I need
you
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help with
pet sitting
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pet-sitting
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my Dog Zane for a few weeks . I will be going on a
two -week
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two-week
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vacation in Greece and I couldn't ask anyone else to help me with
this
small task as you know Zane is picky and not open to everyone .
However
, I have seen how comfortable he is around you and I believe you're the best candidate for
this
.All you have to do is prepare his meals on time , he eats breakfast and dinner on a daily basis . Please don't give him lunch or snacks in between because of his
lose
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loose
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stomach , you'll end up doing a lot of cleaning . The
meals
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timetable is on the fridge and you can find all his food in the pantry . Zane enjoys his morning walks so you'll have to walk him every morning at 7am for 30 minutes
then
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and then
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serve him breakfast
after
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afterwards
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. He sleeps most of the daytime so you'll get to enjoy your personal time as well but
donot
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do not
don't
let him out of your sight as he tends to get naughty sometimes and destroys whatever is around him . About the baths , You are to bathe him only on weekends , he enjoys water
therefore
you
wont
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have any hard time with
this
. If he tries to become a menace
while
in the bath , his toys are a great distraction .
Incase
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of any
further
questions , I'm just a phone call away . Don't hesitate to
facetime
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me . I will greatly compensate you for your help . Thank you With love , Rebecca
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accuracy
Remember to proofread your letter for small typos, such as 'lose stomach' instead of 'loose stomach', to maintain a high level of accuracy.
structure
Try to organize your ideas into clear paragraphs to enhance readability. For instance, dedicate separate paragraphs to meals, walks, baths, and any additional information.
task response
You did a great job in addressing all parts of the task in a detailed and engaging manner.
tone
The friendly and warm tone throughout the letter is very appropriate given the recipient and the nature of the request.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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