the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table and charts
compares
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the
police
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income and expenditure in one area in the UK between 2017 and 2018.
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, it can be clearly seen from the table that the
police
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's total budget was slightly higher in 2018 than the previous year. Meanwhile, the
police
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spent a large proportion of its budget to pay its officers and staff salaries. More than half of the
police
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funding came from
National
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the National
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Government. The table shows that in 2017, funding from the
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government
was at 175.5 million, and it increased
at
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177.8 million in the following year.
Second
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biggest funding came from local taxes
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and
then
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followed by other sources,
such
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as grants.
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it experienced a decline in 2018, officers and staff wages became the
police
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biggest spending. Interestingly, spending on Technology was only 8% in 2017 but
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significantly to 14% in the next year. At the same time, the budget for buildings and transport remained the same during the period.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words police with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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