You use public trasnport and have been facing issues. Write a letter to the public transport autoroties. In your letter include: why public transport is important to you what problem you face suggest what can be done to improve public transport
Dear Sir ,
I am writing
this
letter to express my deep grievances on
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the
public transportation.
I am a Correct article usage
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middle class
person and I travel a lot Add a hyphen
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buses
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trains
because it is a cheap source of transportation which suits me Fix the agreement mistake
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due to
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Yesterday, I had a crucial meeting at my office which Correct article usage
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however
, the bus was late for 4 hours and I was unable to attend that meeting as a result
, someone else got that opportunity . When I asked the reason from
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the driver
of
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the
multinational company.
I request you to provide Correct article usage
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great transportation network for the welfare of the public if , people like him Correct article usage
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I strongly assert that Correct subject-verb agreement
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this
issue must be addressed at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
JaiSubmitted by Kaurharvinder2984 on
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Formality in opening and closing
Begin by addressing the recipient more formally, with titles (e.g., "Dear Public Transport Authority"), and ensure the conclusion is also formally closed ("Yours sincerely,"). This will enhance the professionalism of your letter.
Single idea per paragraph
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea - while you have done this well, expanding each idea with more support or examples could strengthen your argument.
Complete response with solutions
When explaining the issues you face, clearly outline the impact on you and suggest more specific improvements or solutions that could address these issues.
Logical structure
Work on improving the letter's logical structure by connecting ideas more smoothly between paragraphs. Use transitional phrases to guide the reader through your argument coherently.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.