The maps illustrate the changes in the Local Museum at the north-east corner of Hartford Street and Redcliff Street in three separate years: 1957, 1987, 2007.

The maps illustrate the changes in the Local Museum at the north-east corner of Hartford Street and Redcliff Street in three separate years: 1957, 1987, 2007.
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The image demonstrates the Museum located at Hartford Street in 1957 and how it was reconstructed by 2007, with all the changes throughout the given period in 50 years.
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, it is noticeable that the building almost doubled in size
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and a lot of new activities opened.
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, a garden took place all around the facility back in 1957,
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in 2007 garden was placed at a small corner in the back yard of the Museum, all other place was given for the parking lot. It is interesting to note that, previously the museum consisted of three rooms,
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in 2007 that number doubled. The local history room increased and became the centre of a building that connected all other galleries.
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opened a shop and cafe for customer comfort. It is important to mention that in 1957 outside parks were more diverse with plenty of different trees.
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, most of them were cut to build a car park in front of the building.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • attract a broader audience
  • infrastructure
  • interactive displays
  • virtual tours
  • environmental sustainability
  • community engagement
  • strategic partnerships
  • inclusive exhibitions
  • accessibility
  • branding and marketing strategies
  • evolution
  • maintain relevance
  • appeal
  • differently-abled visitors
  • cultural institutions
  • educational organizations
  • joint exhibits
  • exchange programs
  • green spaces
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