The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002
The given column graph illustrates the total number of
minutes
(in billions) of phone calls in the United Kingdom, including local fixed line
calls, National and international Add a hyphen
fixed-line
fixed line
calls, and mobile calls between 1995 and 2002. Add a hyphen
fixed-line
Overall
, the proportion of local fixed calls ranked first throughout the whole time frame. Moreover
, over the given period, both mobile calls and national/ international experienced
gradually grew.
Throughout Replace the word
experiences
this
time, the total minutes
of mobile calls and National and International calls followed a similar pattern to each other, which the former ranged from nearly 2 billion
and almost two fifth billion
, and the latter started the point at 35 billion
,
and finished at three fifth.
Gradually, the total number of Remove the comma
apply
minutes
of local calls experienced a consistent trend, so that that of local calls rose from a large proportion of minute
in 1995 to 90 Fix the agreement mistake
minutes
billion
in 1999, after which these calls decreased slightly year-on-year until they ended the period at around the same initial value – 70 billion
minutes
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