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İn some countries ,a few people eran extremely high salaries.Some people think that this is good for a country,while others believe that the goverment should control and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both two views and give your opinion.

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salaries
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people
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high
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benefits
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 a country, and other
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people
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opposed
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 view. In forwards
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views
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then
 draw my own opinion. The
people
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salaries
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. They stand
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many
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if
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people
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money, they will buy more, and
this
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 the power of
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Second,
the nations' psychology became
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better with a steady income.
Thus
,
people
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entertainment
ectivites
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activities
. Oman,
for example
. After, Increased the range of
salaries
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 became
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less than before a one year.
Therefore
, they believe a rise
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bring
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a positives
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positives
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such
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 the Business market and the psychology of
people
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people
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three
category
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 poor, middle state, and rich. To illustrate more, if
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people
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will
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a
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human activity between
people
such
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people
give
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a
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 poorest
people
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humanist
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.
Thus
, making a society without
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emotional
emotions
.
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reasons
is
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 a high
salaries
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salary
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cused
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cause
a
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inflactions
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inflexions
infractions
inflation
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To sum up
, both
of
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view
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 have
reasons
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 their opinions. personally, l agree with the first
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opinion
, and l think that
people
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opinion
 do not have
a
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satisified
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satisfied
reasons
.
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  • economic disparity
  • government intervention
  • progressive tax system
  • societal divide
  • income caps
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  • productivity
  • innovation
  • public services
  • cohesive society
  • talent attraction
  • lucrative sectors
  • wealth accumulation
  • tax contributions
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