Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extent do you agree?

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young people support and value

scientists

and technology

experts

more than

musicians

and

artists

. To a certain extent, I agree that

youth

supports

scientists

and

experts

.

However

, I

also

think that

musicians

and

artists

are more valued. Main body On the one hand, I have to say that modern

society

is inclined to

favor

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towards

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scientists

and

experts

more. There are a

lot

of students and

youth

that

are tend

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to investigate and invent something. They study their lessons well, and they do not care about other

entertainments

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forms

more

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. They spend their most of time on books by reading the

scientists

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and

experts

’ inventions.

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is why they value

experts

and

scientists

a

lot

.

For example

, these young people take part in their conferences

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, watch a

lot

of videos about them, and try to be like them.

On the other hand

, I believe that a big part of modern

society

is tend

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to

musicians

and

artists

. Modern

society

loves entertainment more than science. Nowadays, if we observe carefully, we can easily see that

youth

are too enthusiastic about concerts and movies.

For example

, if we look at concert programs, we can see that

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there is not any empty place, all places are taken by teenagers and young men and women. We can see headphones in almost all young people and they use

it

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to listen to the song.

While

they love music a

lot

, they learn about the

musicians

and

artists

a

lot

, they adore them. So, they follow their

favorite

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musician or artist and they even learn the lyrics of songs by heart.

As a result

, we can see that

musicians

and

artists

are more valued by modern

society

. Conclusion In conclusion,

while

I admit that modern

society

values

scientists

and

experts

, I do not believe that most

of

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youth

are

such

.

Artists

and

musicians

are more followed and valued

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ones

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.