Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extent do you agree?

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young people support and value

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and technology

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more than

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supports

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are more valued. Main body On the one hand, I have to say that modern

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scientists

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more. There are a

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of students and

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to investigate and invent something. They study their lessons well, and they do not care about other

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. They spend their most of time on books by reading the

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is why they value

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of videos about them, and try to be like them.

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to

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loves entertainment more than science. Nowadays, if we observe carefully, we can easily see that

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are too enthusiastic about concerts and movies.

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, if we look at concert programs, we can see that

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there is not any empty place, all places are taken by teenagers and young men and women. We can see headphones in almost all young people and they use

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to listen to the song.

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they love music a

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, they learn about the

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, they adore them. So, they follow their

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musician or artist and they even learn the lyrics of songs by heart.

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, we can see that

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are more valued by modern

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I admit that modern

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values

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, I do not believe that most

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are more followed and valued

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