Some people believe that the government should fund art and culture, while others think that it should only fund sciences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that

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funding should

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not to be used to

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and

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other's opinions say that

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support

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for cultural activities has a positive impact on the population and

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. I believe that supporting

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and

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through

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funding would help the nation to protect our

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and

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.

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, many positive impacts would happen if the

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supported through

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funding. The local citizen would preserve their own

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and

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which is important for the young generation. So, the next generation would still have the opportunity to learn and know their cultural

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and identity.

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, The Amercan-Indian lost their

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and

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no

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given by the

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.

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, the other positive impact is our

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would go overseas which would increase our economy.

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thing is not easy there are lot

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that shows that many countries already made their

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and

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go international.

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in South Korea, we all know that South Korea was not only successful in promoting its

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and

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but

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did very well in increasing its economy by managing its

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and

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.

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, the

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has the

capabilities

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to decide which moves are great for the nation and its cultures. By their regulations and policies, the

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and

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in society could be protected and well managed to gain the economics and give benefits through the

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programs. To the conclusion, the

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and

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are essential for a country.

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country that does not

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their own

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would bring them to the end of their identities. So, providing the

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and

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with

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funds would help to preserve the

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and

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of a country that in the future will bring

positive

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impact on the economic scale of the nation.