The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The picture depicts that domestic

electricity

provider

that

is used

Wrong verb form

uses

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solar energy.

Overall

it is clear that

solar panels absorb energy from the sun and produce

electricity

by using

inverter

Fix the agreement mistake

inverters

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, electrical

panel

Fix the agreement mistake

panels

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utility

melter

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melters

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utility

Correct word choice

and utility

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grid

Fix the agreement mistake

grids

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. The solar

panel

is located on top of the house and Inverter and

Utility

meter are presented on the wall.

Firstly

, Sun ray is absorbed by solar panels and

Correct pronoun usage

they

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transfers

Correct subject-verb agreement

transfer

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into DC current, which

converts

Wrong verb form

is converted

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into AC current by Interver and it monitors the

electricity

and production. The

electricity

is distributed to

house

Add an article

the house

a house

show examples

Electrical

Correct article usage

an Electrical

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panel

which is presented on the wall.

Secondly

, extra solar

electricity

can be collected in the

Utility

grid and it will turn back through the

Utility

Meter. When the

electricity

produced by solar

panel

Fix the agreement mistake

panels

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run out or during the

night time

Correct your spelling

nighttime

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, the

Utility

Grid will provide

electricity

Change preposition

for

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the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

domestic

usage

Replace the word

users

show examples

. It is

hanged

Replace the word

hung

show examples

on the wall which is presented next to the Inverter box.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, panel, utility with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "presented" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

157 words

4.50

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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diagram
solar panels
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domestic use
renewable energy
photovoltaic cells
sunlight
generate
store
inverter
power grid
environmentally friendly
efficient
cost-effective
sustainable
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solar energy
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