The table shows data about the average income for one person in dollars, across two different age groups: under 18 and over 60, as well as the percentage of the poor population in three states in the US, namely California, Utah, and Florida
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The table shows data about the average
income
for one person
in dollars, across two different age groups: under 18 and over 60, as well as
the percentage of the poor population
in three states
in the US, namely California
, Utah
, and Florida
.
Overall
, the highest average income
per person
is in California
and Florida
. By contrast
, the rate of the poor population
is the least
in Correct word choice
lowest
Utah
. It is also
clear that the percentage of hardworking people
, aged under 18, is highest
in Correct article usage
the highest
Utah
among the three states
.
Looking at the details, more young people
, aged under 18, work in Utah
(28%), while
the highest rate of people
who work in the age group over 60 is in Florida
(23%). Comparing this
percentage to the state of California
, the highest share of employed people
is 17% among those aged under 18, while
13% of employees continue working after their 60s.
Turning to average income
per person
and the population
below the poverty line, the states
with the highest salaries are California
and Florida
, with $23,000 and $22,000 US dollars respectively. Despite the high income
in California
, the share of poor people
constitutes 16% of the population
, the highest among the three states
. Although
the salary is lower in Utah
, at $17,000 US dollars per person
, the proportion of the poor is also
the lowest at 9%.Submitted by Shaxnoza on
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