The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map describes a plan of development of

a

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industrial area in Norbiton. It is noticeable that more facilities and housings will be built in the

futher

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future

,

while

the number of

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the factory

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factory

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factories

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will see a decrease. Looking into more details, there will be two more extra branched

scratch

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scratches

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out the round road. One

lead

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leads

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to 2 housing areas,

the

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other one

lead

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leads

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to a bridge across the river

has

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a housing area along the way, which

end

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at a housing area.

One

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the same side, there will still

have

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a

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farmland, but occupied a smaller space

comparing

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to now. What is

also

worth noticing is that more facilities

of

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for

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living will be supplied in the

futher

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future

further

,

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, there will be shops

at

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on

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the west side of the larger round road,

while

the medical centre, playground and school will be

at

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on

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the east side of it.

Moreover

, there will be three housing areas surrounded by these three facilities

instead

of factories currently.