The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map describes a plan of development of
a
industrial area in Norbiton.
It is noticeable that more facilities and housings will be built in the Change the article
an
futher
, Correct your spelling
future
while
the number of Linking Words
Add an article
the factory
factory
will see a decrease.
Looking into more details, there will be two more extra branched Change to a plural noun
factories
scratch
out the round road. One Fix the agreement mistake
scratches
lead
to 2 housing areas, Correct subject-verb agreement
leads
the
other one Correct word choice
and the
lead
to a bridge across the river Correct subject-verb agreement
leads
has
a housing area along the way, which Correct pronoun usage
that has
end
at a housing area. Correct subject-verb agreement
ends
One
the same side, there will still Correct your spelling
On
have
Verb problem
be
a
farmland, but occupied a smaller space Remove the article
apply
comparing
to now.
What is Change the form of the verb
compared
also
worth noticing is that more facilities Linking Words
of
living will be supplied in the Change preposition
for
futher
, Correct your spelling
future
further
for example
, there will be shops Linking Words
at
the west side of the larger round road, Change preposition
on
while
the medical centre, playground and school will be Linking Words
at
the east side of it. Change preposition
on
Moreover
, there will be three housing areas surrounded by these three facilities Linking Words
instead
of factories currently.Linking Words
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