The map below shows a park and its surroundings in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The two diagrams indicate a Grange
Park
layout and how it has changed between 1920 and the current day.
Overall
, it is readily apparent that the park
has undergone several changes along with
improvements to facilities for the neighbourhood which include the construction of a new playground and a car park
Before the development, the layout of the public park
seems very simple. Firstly
, the most noticeable feature of the park
is the fountain, which is located centre of the park
and there is a stage for musicians next to the fountain. In addition
, there are three Rose gardens near both sides of the entrances. Furthermore
, there was a greenhouse near Eldon Street.
By looking at the second diagram, it is clear that
the current park
layout has been completely redesigned. First and foremost, a huge rose garden is located in the middle of the park
and seats surround the garden. Also
, a playground for children and a cafe are added next to the entrance adjoining Arnold Avenue. Last
but not least, the stage is changed to an amphitheatre for concerts at the same site and a car park
entrance near the water feature .Submitted by wowoo04066 on
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