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The chart below shows information about fuel used in the transport sector in different countries in Europe, compared to the EU average, in 2009 and 2010.

The chart below shows information about fuel used in the transport sector in different countries in Europe, compared to the EU average, in 2009 and 2010.
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The graph demonstrates the consumption of
fuel
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 in Slovakia, Italy, France, Austria, Spain and Greece. Two time periods were compared.
Overall
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, it is evident from the data that, in 2009 among all the countries just Slovakia used more
fuel
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 than the average. In general
fuel
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 consumption decreased in 2010,
however
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 in Italy, France and Greece there was an incline. It is interesting to note that Greece's transport sector consumed the least amount of resources for two years straight, even so, there was a rapid growth in numbers by around 1 per cent.
On the other hand
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, 2010 witnessed a drastic fall in
fuel
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 consumption in Slovakia,
however
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, the number was still bigger than the average of 1,5 per cent. It is noticeable that Austria was the only country whose
fuel
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 usage had remained at the same point of 5,1 per cent.
While
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 Italy and France increased their usage of
fuel
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 in the transport sector.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fuel with synonyms.
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