The pie charts show the revenue source for U.S. highways for last year and U.S. highway expenditure by type for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relecant.

The pie charts show the revenue source for U.S. highways for last year and U.S. highway expenditure by type for last year. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relecant.
The pie chart
illustrate
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the portion of six types of the revenue source in
U.S.
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, we can see that Motor-Fuel Taxes and General Funds,at 25.1% and 23.4% respectively, were the significant expansion, which together accounted for almost half the expenditure of highway. Looking at the
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, the rate of Other, which
followed
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approximately 20.3%. Another revenue
sources
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is Motor-Vechicle Taxes, at 13.0%, followed by
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Bonds
at 12.1%, Tolls
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only 6.2%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • revenue sources
  • expenditure
  • proportions
  • significant disparities
  • maintenance
  • expansion
  • administration
  • safety improvements
  • correlated
  • mismatches
  • aligned categories
  • efficiency
  • priorities
  • budgeting
  • sustainability
  • infrastructure
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