Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There are two types of professionals based on how they choose places where they are going to
work
after Use synonyms
graduated
from their Change the form of the verb
graduating
trainings
. It is debatable whether they choose to Change the wording
training
pieces of training
work
in the same Use synonyms
country
where they got their degree or not. People are divided into two different sides of Use synonyms
this
issue, the one who Linking Words
think
it is a must to Change the verb form
thinks
work
in the same Use synonyms
country
and the one who Use synonyms
think
it is their freedom to choose which Correct subject-verb agreement
thinks
country
they want to Use synonyms
work
in. Use synonyms
This
essay will discuss both sides of the Linking Words
arguments
and provide clear explanations why it is required for them to Fix the agreement mistake
argument
work
in the same Use synonyms
country
.
Use synonyms
Firstly
, they owe to the Linking Words
country
where they pursue their degree, especially if they get a scholarship for that. Use synonyms
For instance
, governments who provide scholarships for medicine schools clearly want to escalate local health services quality by helping Linking Words
the
potential doctor candidates Correct article usage
apply
in studying
medicine. They have Change preposition
to study
spend
a lot of money in order to establish great doctors who will be expected to cure the other citizens who Wrong verb form
spent
got
sick. Wrong verb form
get
Therefore
, it is Linking Words
a
common sense that these doctors or professionals need to contribute back by working in that Correct article usage
apply
country
.
Use synonyms
Secondly
, they tend to learn knowledge that Linking Words
suit
Correct subject-verb agreement
suits
with
that Change preposition
apply
Use synonyms
country
characteristics. Change noun form
country's
For example
, engineers who learn civil engineering in a Linking Words
country
who prone to earthquakes will tend to learn how to build strong buildings that Use synonyms
safe
from earthquakes. Add a missing verb
are safe
Linking Words
While engineers
who study in Correct word choice
Engineers
a
cold territory will be capable Correct article usage
apply
to build
buildings that Change preposition
of building
safe
from winter storms. Add a missing verb
are safe
Consequently
, the more suitable their knowledge Linking Words
with
the Change preposition
to
Use synonyms
country
needs, the better and the more maximum they can utilize their skills.
In conclusion, I believe that requiring professionals to stay and make use Change noun form
country's
their
understandings in the same place where they pursued them is a great policy. Change preposition
of their
Furthermore
, the benefits and positive effects both the Linking Words
country
and the individuals will gain are much more. Because if they Use synonyms
did
not contribute back to their surroundings, Wrong verb form
do
then
their surroundings can not receive good impacts from them.Linking Words
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task achievement
Your essay somewhat addresses the prompt but leans heavily towards one viewpoint, slightly neglecting the discussion of the alternative perspective. To improve, ensure you discuss both sides of the argument equally and provide a balanced evaluation before stating your opinion.
coherence cohesion
Though you've introduced and concluded your essay, the connection and transition between paragraphs could be enhanced. Try using linking words and phrases to improve the flow of ideas, such as 'on the other hand', 'in contrast', or 'moreover' to introduce different viewpoints or additional arguments.
coherence cohesion
To effectively support your main points, consider providing more varied examples and evidence. While the examples given are relevant, incorporating a broader range of evidence will strengthen your argument. This includes statistical data, case studies, or contrasting scenarios from different countries.
Your opinion
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