what should we do to protect the environment?What are the solutions for this?

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Nowadays people have been damaging the
environment
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a lot.Most of
this
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is from the factory emissions
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this
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which
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cause water pollution,air pollution and soil pollution. So the best way to help the
environment
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become better is
try
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to try
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to reduce factory emissions before they come out into the
environment
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. Are you less using plastic because these materials take
very
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a very
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long time to
decomposition
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decompose
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in the
environment
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.
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?
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So
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I
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i
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I
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usually
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use
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uses
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use
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my own
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bottled
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bottle
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bottled
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water not
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a normal
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normal
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plassic
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plastic
can,
these
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there
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is
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are
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just a very small action but it can affect the
enviroment
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environment
a lot. My school
also
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usually celebrates some charity to encourage everyone
pick
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to pick
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up litter,and recycle it.I always join that charity because I want to help the
environment
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.
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, do whatever you can if it helps the
environment
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.
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Task Response
To improve your task response, make sure to fully address the question by providing a wider range of solutions beyond just reducing factory emissions and using less plastic. Develop your ideas further with more comprehensive explanations and additional solutions to enhance environmental protection.
Coherence and Cohesion
Enhance coherence and cohesion by organizing your essay more logically. This includes having a clear introduction stating your main points, well-structured body paragraphs for each main idea, and a conclusion summarizing your views. Use linking words effectively to connect ideas.
Coherence and Cohesion
To boost coherence even further, support your main points with specific examples or data where possible. This strengthens your argument and makes your essay more persuasive.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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  • Renewable resources
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Ecotourism
  • Environmental degradation
  • Sustainable development
  • Conservation efforts
  • Ecosystem services
  • Pollution prevention
  • Natural habitats
  • Wildlife protection
  • Climate resilience
  • Resource management
  • Stewardship
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