The chart gives information about the average annual water consumption in kilolitre per property in Australian cities, namely Sydney, Perth, Adelaide, Brisbane, Melbourne and Canberra for last year, with the pie chart that shows the distribution of Australian water consumption by the year 2014.

The chart gives information about the average annual water consumption in kilolitre per property in Australian cities, namely Sydney, Perth, Adelaide, Brisbane, Melbourne and Canberra for last year, with the pie chart that shows the distribution of Australian water consumption by the year 2014.
The bar chart illustrates how much
water
was consumed by residents per year in 6 different cities,
while
the pie chart depicts how
water
was distributed during the given period.
Overall
, it is evident that Perth was at the top in terms of used
water
and the major proportion of
water
was used for agricultural purposes. As regards the bar chart, Perth ranked
first,
with 300
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. The
water
consumption of Brisbane and Adelaide was almost the same with just under 250
kiloliter
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, which was followed by Sydney, at approximately 200
kiloliter
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. The less
water
usage
beloned
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belonged
to Melbourne and Canberra, which stood at nearly 50
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for
previous
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year. In terms of distribution of consumed
water
, the largest proportion of
water
accounted for agriculture, with 67%,
then
households stood in
the
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second place, with just under 10%. The proportions of both Electricity and gas supply and
water
supply, sewage, and drainage were equal, at 7%. For manufacturing and mining, 4% and 2% of
water
is used, respectively. The remaining 4% went to other industries.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, kiloliter with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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